there still isn't a comm for organizing our FE6G stuff...
Thursday, 11 April 2013 17:17After tackling the obstacle that is "Distance and Travel Times Being Inconsistent in Elibe" last night, I came to a total of ten new pages of script.
And then I deleted it all and rewrote it. It's now seven pages long. Smaller, but closer to my target length. Much more concise, much better than the first time around. Success...! Kind of. Still two pages longer than I'd like for the draft, but I can't bring it down anymore. ("Kyusil... the rest is up to you. I have the utmost faith in your abilities! I give you my best wishes, and this obscenely long document!" -my inner self)
Chapter Six now has a proper chapter start dialogue! Tentative title: "Daddy!Eliwood Ships Roy/Lilina; Also, Nils is Here and We're Going to Etruria"
It's bound to be a grand adventure.
Also I should probably type up the notes I took while out and about the other day. They were fun to write.
And then I deleted it all and rewrote it. It's now seven pages long. Smaller, but closer to my target length. Much more concise, much better than the first time around. Success...! Kind of. Still two pages longer than I'd like for the draft, but I can't bring it down anymore. ("Kyusil... the rest is up to you. I have the utmost faith in your abilities! I give you my best wishes, and this obscenely long document!" -my inner self)
Chapter Six now has a proper chapter start dialogue! Tentative title: "Daddy!Eliwood Ships Roy/Lilina; Also, Nils is Here and We're Going to Etruria"
It's bound to be a grand adventure.
Also I should probably type up the notes I took while out and about the other day. They were fun to write.